Recount Text The Frozen Pool
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The Frozen Pool
Fumbling hands. Frozen breath. Heart thumping. “Come on aunty Jo you are
a slow coach! ”Yelled Daniel as he scampered off to put on his ice
skates. I gingerly picked up the dreaded blue instruments of torture and
sat down on the brown, peeling varnished bench. I forced my warm feet
into the freezing skates and started to lace them up. By this time,
Daniel was jumping up and down on the spot like a pogo stick. He was
excited – I was nervous! Finally we were ready…
Our journey across the ancient, worn
carpet was slow and painful. I was so pleased I had worn thick socks and
a warm woolly jumper. The backs of my skates were rubbing my heels and
my feet felt like they were on fire. Suddenly we were at the mouth of
the rink. The ice was shimmering and glimmering and people were gliding
across the rink with ease. Holding onto the wall, I stepped onto the
slick ice. Immediately my feet slipped and I landed on the cold, moist
ice in shame. My 5 year old helper quickly skated over and offered his
hand! “Come on aunty Jo you are a slow coach!”
30 minutes later, my nose bright red and
my bottom VERY wet. I had had enough. Daniel had not fallen over; in
fact he was a fantastic skater. My hands were like blocks of ice and my
breath was wafting through the air like delicate smoke. We made our way
to the busy café and ordered 2 hot chocolates. Within minutes my chilled
hands were wrapped around the blistering cup and they were slowly
thawing out. The hot chocolate tasted like liquid heaven and feeling was
returning to my toes! Daniel gulped down his drink and was eager to get
back on the ice. I was not. “Come on aunty Jo you ARE a slow coach!”
Taken from: http://www.primaryresources.co.uk
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